Hi Kaitlyn :) You do a nice job of providing your viewer with the opposite sides of the island experience. You have some really strong titles for the images which gives your audience a clear sense of how to "read" the images and enter the narrative. Some really good images in the reality section of the essay. One of my favorites is the "Daily Torture" image where your use of the overhead angle reinforces the diminishment of the donkeys/their vulnerableness as well as how you frame the image by playing on the symmetry of so many donkeys in a row to show the sheer number who live this day in and day out.
Hi Kaitlyn :) You do a nice job of providing your viewer with the opposite sides of the island experience. You have some really strong titles for the images which gives your audience a clear sense of how to "read" the images and enter the narrative. Some really good images in the reality section of the essay. One of my favorites is the "Daily Torture" image where your use of the overhead angle reinforces the diminishment of the donkeys/their vulnerableness as well as how you frame the image by playing on the symmetry of so many donkeys in a row to show the sheer number who live this day in and day out.
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